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SOPHIE

The door shut with a hush that was not silence so much as attention. It was the kind of quiet a room makes when the beating of your own heart echoes in your ears.

Sophie stopped. She drew a long breath and let it out.

“Alright,” she murmured, more to herself than to anyone listening. “Let’s see what this is about.”

The corridor ahead did not extend so much as accumulate. She could not see an end—only a narrowing perspective of gleam after gleam, panels held in living wood as if the tree had grown mirrors in place of marrow. Each held a sheen like a still pond under moonlight. Each showed her, and also—instantly, intuitively—not her.

Her Insight, which usually sat like a companion behind the eyes—cool, dry, given to truths both helpful and not—shivered and retreated from her notice. The usual prickle at the base of her skull was gone, replaced by nothing.

“Now you leave me?” Sophie said, because talking to her infuriating ability seemed like a good idea at the time. “It was your idea to come here in the first place.”

She walked because she couldn’t think of a better alternative.

The first mirror caught her as if she had been rushing toward it her entire life.

Beloved.

She stood in a gown she would never wear—too soft at the shoulder, too generous in the fall of fabric. The reflection’s hair glowed like a summer field. Her mouth was fuller. Her eyes softer. Crowds pressed behind her, smiling the way people smile when they want something from what they call love. A man—no one she recognized, his face a composite of all the harmless suitors she had dismissed—knelt, offering a ring she would never accept.

The mirror breathed on the inside of the glass. Words fogged it in someone else’s seabed handwriting:

You want to be adored.

“No,” she said, and her voice did not waver. “I want to be useful.”

The fog cleared. The beloved version smiled at her anyway, mouthing liar in a way that felt like affection.

She walked on.

The second mirror felt colder.

Feared.

In this one, she was crowned—not the way the Palace would do it, with a ritual that tasted like dust and incense and men fighting over the right to put metal on your skull. This was a crown in the eyes of others. The hall in the reflection widened into a throne room she had dismissed a hundred times in a hundred fantasies she would never admit. People bowed until their hands shook. Some trembled without bowing at all, which meant fear had already gone rancid and turned to hatred.

Between her hands in the mirror was a ledger—not the little journals she kept her Insight in, but a book made of heavier things than paper. Names etched. Decisions carved. Every choice annotated with a cost. The corners of the pages had been sharpened into blades.

The glass breathed again.

You want control.

“Control is a tool,” she said to the woman who was her but not, whose mouth was set in the precise line she wore when she was tired of pretending to smile. “Not a goal.”

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The her on the other side did not argue, but her jaw acknowledged the lie on Sophie’s behalf. She moved on before she could soften.

The third mirror did not wait for her to stop.

Broken.

She does not cry in front of mirrors. If she had learned anything of palaces and people, it was that pain was to be hidden and weakness was never tolerated.

But this mirror stopped her.

It showed her hurting where no one could see. Not dramatics, not the grand opera of grief. The little cracks: how her hand shook minutely when she was very, very tired and pretending not to be. How her laugh carried an edge it hadn’t before. How the corners of her mouth had learned things about resignation her eyes hadn’t told them they were allowed to know.

“Cruel,” she told the mirror. “Hateful.”

It brightened in response, as if acknowledging something she could not articulate. She hated it more because of that.

The fourth one burned at the edges.

Corrupted.

Power loves to widen pupils. On the other side of the glass, hers were a flood. She looked exquisite—the way a viper looks exquisite before it strikes. Her Insight no longer sat with her; it coiled around her throat like jewelry. People moved like pieces in a game she hadn’t been invited to but had decided to win anyway by inventing new rules and punishing those who didn’t learn them fast enough.

This one felt… plausible.

Sophie could be this woman. If she stopped caring about the cost of the ledger, Sophie Virelyn could be magnificent.

The glass fogged.

You want the throne.

Her tongue tasted like copper. “Do I?” she asked. “Do I want to rule?”

The mirror Sophie tilted its head in that silent, infuriating way reflections do when you argue with yourself. It was the exact angle the Empress wore when she knew Sophie had already decided to do the thing she was about to forbid.

Sophie stepped back.

The corridor breathed with her. Her Insight tried to creep forward, then darted back like a cat leaping onto a shelf only to discover the porcelain wasn’t porcelain at all.

“Fine,” she said to the mirrors, to the echo of the goddess she suspected was listening, to her own arrogance. “Do you want a confession? I want all of those things sometimes. To be adored because it’s easier than being alone. To be feared because it’s cleaner than being disappointed. To be allowed to break. To be allowed to win without asking permission.”

Her voice echoed, and it was the most real thing she had ever heard.

“So,” she said, and it felt like speaking across a table where she had often sat alone, “you know. You’ve heard. You’ve seen. Now what?”

The corridor shifted.

At first she thought it was the kind of shift one feels when they are tired—things leaning that did not lean. But the floor did not list. The air did. The frames of the mirrors loosened, then bound tighter again, as if the tree that held them had been asked to flex and had decided that was beneath it.

Her Insight rose like a bubble under ice. Not picking a mask,

it said, the way it always did—unhelpful, half-formed, useful only in retrospect. Weaving.

“You could have said that sooner,” she muttered.

The next mirror was not by itself. It was held up by branches woven together, and behind it, through it, Sophie could see others—the beloved, the feared, the broken, the corrupted—not as separate halls, but as rooms in a single house.

The glass wrote, and this time the hand looked like hers.

Choose.

“Choose which?” she asked. “That’s how traps work.”

Choose how.

“Oh,” she said. And then, because she is very clever until she is not: “Oh.”

Her Insight came closer. It did not sit behind her eyes as it usually did. It sat in her hands. In her tongue. In the places where choice becomes sentence, and sentence becomes action, and action becomes cost.

She looked at the beloved Sophie. At the feared Sophie. At the broken Sophie. She looked at the corrupted Sophie and refused to name her. Names have power. She did not give her one.

Behind all of them, barely there at the edge of the reflected frame like a smudge a lazy polisher would be fired for leaving, was another image.

It wasn’t Sophie. It was…

Them.

Vivian’s stance, a fraction too square when she was tired, corrected by sheer discipline. Anmei’s grin when she was about to jump and knew she shouldn’t, but jumped anyway. Marissa’s fan, wielded like armor but dangerous as a blade. The twins’ hands, holding in their worry and in their courage. Elizabeth’s mouth, always about to say something ruinous and true.

She saw her idiot brother bowing too deeply, blind in his loyalty. She saw courtiers in the Imperial Palace weaving schemes like cheap silk. She saw mortals with their short lives—dreaming, plotting, fighting—not because they expected to win, but because to not try was worse.

And then—Ethan.

Ethan Zhou in two forms. One cold, brilliant, desperate for connection, for understanding, for purpose. The other focused, protective, instinctive. A hero who would fight, sacrifice, endure—for Vivian, for her, for all of them.

Two Ethans. She didn’t know if it was prediction or possibility. But she knew which one she had to cultivate. Which one needed her support—in mind, in body, in heart.

The mirrors seemed to know it too. They waited.

Sophie lifted her chin.

The trial had never been about who she was. It was about how she would weave.

The door to her trial opened. She stepped through.She laughed. “Good answer.”