From Deadbeat noble to Top Rank Swordsman
Chapter 77: The Ravine Gate
CHAPTER 77: THE RAVINE GATE
The fog peeled back.
Not all at once, not like mist fleeing heat—but like a curtain slowly drawn, as though the world itself hesitated to reveal what lay beyond. Inch by inch, the glow became shape. A causeway. Broken, half-sunken stone slabs leading into the depths of the ravine like vertebrae in the back of a buried beast.
Leon advanced, slow and silent.
The others followed.
To their left, the cliff face was smooth—unnaturally so, as if carved by hands that no longer remembered softness. To the right, jagged ridges rose like frozen waves, shadowed in angles that swallowed torchlight.
And ahead, where the glow pulsed, was a gate.
Not a door. Not iron or wood.
A gate of bone.
It arched high above them, crafted from rib-thick white spires and run through with sinew, hardened and blackened with age. At its peak sat an eye—hollow, sculpted, eternal.
"What is this place?" Kellen muttered.
Elena was pale. "It’s not a ruin. It’s not even a tomb. It’s a vault."
Leon turned to the troops. "Hold the line here. No one crosses. Not until I say."
He moved forward with Elena at his side, stopping just shy of the bone gate. The air pulsed—low, steady, like breath in stone lungs. Every step near the threshold made the wards at their backs hum louder, as if protesting the intrusion.
Naeve reappeared from the mist, hood drawn low.
"There’s something behind it," she said. "Massive. Chained. But not asleep. Not entirely."
Leon approached the archway.
And the voice returned.
Not yet. But soon.
The ground shuddered.
A line of light cracked down the centre of the gate.
Elena raised her staff. "It’s reacting to presence. We need to pull back. Now."
Leon hesitated.
Then he turned.
"Back! Full retreat line! Fall to the ridge and prep wards!"
The troops moved instantly, trained fear giving way to execution. Kellen barked orders. Arrows were knocked. Mages began drawing runes in the snow.
The gate pulsed again.
Then stilled.
Leon didn’t breathe until the final archer stepped behind the ward line.
Whatever waited in the deep had seen them.
And now, it was counting the seconds until the gate opened.
He stared at the eye above the arch, its hollow gaze following no one and everyone.
And for the first time since Witchpine Hollow, Leon wondered—
Had they come here by choice?
Or had they been led?
The gate did not open.
But it listened.
The eye above the arch didn’t blink, didn’t shimmer. It simply remained. Watching. And as the last rune was carved into the snow behind them, the earth beneath the stone vertebrae gave a single, low groan. Like something vast shifting in its sleep.
Leon sheathed his blade—but slowly, like drawing a line in sand that would soon wash away.
He turned to Elena. Her hands still pulsed faintly with warding light. "What kind of vault is sealed with bone?" he asked.
She didn’t answer right away. Her brow furrowed, and she placed her palm gently against the nearest rib of the gate. It didn’t resist. But the moment she touched it, frost bloomed up her wrist. She yanked her hand back, teeth gritting.
"It’s not just bone," she said. "It’s fed by something. A living tether. The gate is alive, Leon."
Naeve’s voice came from behind. "Then it bleeds."
They looked to her. She crouched near the edge of the broken causeway, fingers gliding over a streak of blackened ice. Not tar. Not oil. Something thicker. And it pulsed faintly, almost in rhythm with the soundless breath of the vault.
"I’ve seen this before," Naeve said. "In the Hollow Marsh, where the Fen King was buried. The seals there weren’t just to imprison. They were to feed the bindings. Whoever—or whatever—is in here, it was meant to stay fed. And awake."
Leon stepped forward again. "It’s a prison, then."
"Worse," Elena murmured. "It’s a contract. Old magic. Pact-bound. This gate doesn’t just hold something back. It’s bound to release it... when the terms are met."
Kellen spat. "What terms?"
No one answered.
The drums had faded, but the silence that followed felt even heavier. Like the moment before a verdict was passed. Every soldier could feel it—the sense of watching, of judgement.
Leon turned toward the vanguard. "Circle the perimeter. Keep torchlight low. No spells beyond wardwork. We don’t provoke it. Not unless it acts."
Kellen saluted and moved at once, forming staggered rings of defence.
But Elena stayed close. Her eyes lingered on the eye at the gate’s peak.
"Leon... I think it knows you."
He looked at her. "What?"
"Not you, exactly. But your name. Your bloodline. There’s something in the shaping of this place—it’s not random. This wasn’t a path we stumbled onto. It was marked."
Leon frowned. "By who?"
She exhaled slowly, her breath forming a thin frost in the unnatural stillness. "That’s the part I’m afraid of."
A sudden gust surged down the ravine path, sharp and dry. It carried no snow. Only sound.
A scraping.
Not from the gate—but behind it.
Heavy.
Rhythmic.
Step.
Drag.
Step.
Drag.
Then silence.
Leon drew again. "Whatever’s moving in there just stood up."
And Naeve, voice tight, added, "And it’s moving toward the gate."
The runes in the snow flared, glowing brighter. The ground began to tremble—not violently, but constantly. As if the ravine itself were exhaling centuries of dust and secrets.
Elena gripped his arm. "We have to seal this place. Not just hold it back—we need to lock it."
Leon’s voice was steady. "You said it was pact-bound. Can that be broken?"
"Maybe," she said. "But not from here. Not from outside. We’d have to go in. Find the anchor. Sever it."
Leon didn’t look away from the gate. "Then prepare."
"You’re not going alone."
"I wasn’t asking."
The wind surged again—and this time, the gate responded.
It began to hum.
Low. Bone-deep. The kind of sound that didn’t move through ears, but through ribs.
The eye at the top shifted. Not in movement—but in direction.
It faced Leon.
And the gate whispered, through breathless stone:
Come home, Thorne.
Leon didn’t flinch.
But his silence was not stillness. It was calculation.
The gate knew his name—but not just the one he bore now. It knew the name buried beneath layers of blood and inheritance, the one written into the crest that once hung above his family’s ancestral keep before it burned.
He stepped forward, ignoring the cries behind him.
Elena shouted, "Leon!" but he didn’t turn.
He walked past the final rune etched in snow.
The wards flared red.
A pulse beat through the bones of the gate. The crack down its centre deepened.
The eye wept. Just once.
A single black tear, thick and slow, dripped from the hollow socket and hit the stone with a hiss of steam.
Leon stopped, one foot from the threshold.
"I am not yours," he whispered.
And the gate replied, gently:
You will be.
The words lingered in the air like a brand. Around them, the bone structure groaned—no longer a gate, but a living mouth that remembered how to open. The black tear sizzled where it struck stone, seeping into a long-dried rune carved at the base. The sigil shimmered—weakly at first, then with growing hunger.
Naeve raised her bow, an arrow already drawn. "Leon. Say the word."
He didn’t speak.
The eye twitched.
Not a shift of stone—but of gaze. It narrowed, focused. Like recognition deepening into intent.
Behind Leon, the wind snapped cold.
Elena’s wards surged into a dome.
And from the bones, voices rose.
Not one. Not many. All.
Every voice that had died behind the vault.
Every vow broken in blood.
Every whisper of the dead who had stood at this gate and failed.
They rose in unison, chanting a name the wind could not carry.
And still, the eye stared.
Leon drew in a breath—slow, sharp.
"Draw back!" he commanded. "Hold the wards! No fire, no steel. Just the silence."
And then, calmly, he stepped back from the threshold.
The eye dimmed.
The bones stilled.
For now.
But deep behind them, a footstep still dragged forward.