CHAPTER 29: CHAPTER 29: THE MOTEL MIRROR TELLS THE TRUTH

POV: Elena

Day 2 — 6:45 PM — Room 211, Sunrise Motor Inn

The walls are beige.

Not warm beige. Not the kind of beige that says, "relax and stay awhile."

Institutional beige. The kind that says: you’re not home, and you never will be again.

There’s a rust-colored stain on the curtain. The mini-fridge hums like it has something to prove. The air smells like lemon cleaner and cigarette ghosts.

And I’ve never felt more like I belong somewhere.

Because everything inside me feels just as grimy.

7:10 PM — What Leaving Feels Like

There’s a difference between walking away and being thrown out.

When I left Aaron’s father, it wasn’t a choice. He told me to go. He didn’t shout. He didn’t slam anything. He just... stopped looking at me like I was real.

I packed my things like a ghost. Milo stood in the hallway and didn’t say a word.

And when I closed that door behind me, I told myself I’d earned this exile.

I had.

But that didn’t stop the ache.

7:22 PM — Flashback: The Week After We First Kissed

Aaron and I sat on the back steps, sharing a bag of Twizzlers like teenagers.

He looked up at the stars and said, "What do we do now?"

And I — stupidly, selfishly — said, "Nothing. We just... keep this moment."

We both knew better.

But we clung to that lie because it was easier than imagining the truth.

Because we both knew the truth meant heartbreak. And consequences. And pain.

8:00 PM — The Mirror Doesn’t Lie

I sat in front of the motel mirror and tried to recognize myself.

My makeup was half-wiped from crying.

My shirt had a stain from coffee I didn’t finish.

And my eyes looked ten years older than they did a month ago.

I used to think I was strong. I built a whole life from nothing. I married a man with two kids and tried to become part of something I didn’t grow up with.

But love snuck in through a back door I didn’t even know was open.

And now all I have is a $42 motel room, one suitcase, and a hundred regrets.

9:15 PM — Knock, Knock

At first, I thought it was room service.

Then I remembered this place doesn’t have room service.

I opened the door.

And there he was.

Aaron.

Soaking wet from the rain. Breathless. Eyes wide.

My knees nearly buckled.

"Aaron?" I whispered.

He just nodded.

I stepped aside.

He stepped in.

9:25 PM — The Storm Arrives

We didn’t say anything at first.

The thunder outside did all the talking.

Finally, he said, "I went home. Milo gave me the note."

I nodded.

He reached into his jacket and pulled out the letter I left behind.

"I read this... and I realized you weren’t the only one who broke something."

I turned away. "You should’ve stayed gone."

"Then why did you leave me a letter?"

I didn’t have an answer.

Because the truth is, I hoped he would read it.

I hoped it would pull him back.

And now that he was here?

I didn’t know if I had the right to let him stay.

9:40 PM — The Words We Never Said

"I loved you," he said.

"I still do."

I shook my head. "You don’t know what love is, Aaron. You’re young. I messed you up. I crossed every line."

"You didn’t mess me up," he said. "You’re the only person who ever made me feel like I wasn’t pretending."

"You’re not pretending," I whispered.

"I was. Until you."

Silence again. This time thicker. Warmer.

"I ruined your life," I said.

"You didn’t ruin it. You changed it."

I turned to face him. His eyes held something I couldn’t name.

Faith? Forgiveness? Madness?

Maybe all three.

10:15 PM — We Don’t Touch

He stayed on the chair. I stayed on the bed.

He didn’t move closer.

Neither did I.

Because we both knew — if we touched — it would all fall apart again.

And we weren’t ready to break each other again.

Not yet.

Maybe not ever.

But for now?

We sat in the same ugly room. Breathing the same heavy air.

Together.

📘 End of Chapter 29

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