The 100,000th Try
Chapter 35: The First Real Day
CHAPTER 35: THE FIRST REAL DAY
Location: Sector 7 Broadcast Relay Center
Time: 6:03 AM
The city woke in silence.
No alarms. No sirens. No morning news.
For the first time in decades, the controlled broadcast grid was dark.
Instead, a soft, simple message played on every screen, every tablet, every phone:
"If this is your first real day... breathe."
People stood still in kitchens, paused at bus stops, sat on rooftops. No chaos. Just stillness. A moment of... disconnection. Or was it reconnection?
Some wept without knowing why.
Some smiled, instinctively.
Kaen watched from a side alley camera feed, his team silent behind him. No orders now—just observation.
"This is it?" Nila whispered.
Kaen nodded. "This is what it looks like before a world chooses."
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Location: Council Tower – Surveillance Room Alpha
Time: 6:45 AM
Councilor Vora stared at the black screens.
No feeds. No control. Their grip—gone overnight.
"Status on blackout recovery?" she barked.
A trembling tech whispered, "Every override command routes to an untraceable node. Our backups reroute through a null signature."
Vora’s voice turned to a hiss. "Say that in words."
"Someone... rewrote the root. The system doesn’t respond to us anymore."
She sank into her chair.
Kaen hadn’t destroyed them.
He’d made them irrelevant.
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Location: Rooftop Garden – Public Hospital, District 3
Time: 7:10 AM
Kaen stood alone now. Even Nila had gone to rest.
He reached into his coat and pulled out a folded photograph—worn at the edges.
It was a group of people no one else remembered. All lost in earlier attempts.
Friends. Allies. Versions of his soul.
One had died in the 322nd loop. Another betrayed him in the 8,491st.
One... he had loved. But never saved.
"This was never about revenge," he murmured.
"It was about making sure no one else wakes up screaming in a world stuck on repeat."
He let the photo drift into the wind.
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Location: Hidden Broadcast Server – Vault 9
Time: 7:31 AM
Nila watched as messages flooded in from across the city:
"Are we safe?"
"Who did this?"
"Can we finally choose our own leaders?"
She looked to Kaen, her voice cautious.
"What do we tell them?"
Kaen met her gaze.
"We tell them the truth."
"That the future isn’t free."
"But it’s finally... theirs."
Location: Public Square, Downtown
Time: 7:45 AM
The quiet of the morning was shattered not by chaos, but by the steady murmur of awakening. City screens, long dormant, now pulsed with snippets of real news—uncensored, raw. Passersby stopped in mid-stride, captivated by messages promising a future unbound by the old order.
On a digital billboard above the square, the message read:
"Tomorrow belongs to those who dare to choose."
The streets filled gradually as everyday citizens, emboldened by the sudden change, began discussing ideas aloud—improvisations of freedom that they’d only whispered about in hushed tones before. The silence that had marked the first real day transformed into a chorus of hopeful voices.
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Location: Community Center, District 3
Time: 8:10 AM
Inside a repurposed community center, people from all walks of life gathered. A spontaneous town hall had sprung up: survivors of forgotten loops, struggling workers, and even a few disillusioned former officials whispered their dreams of self-determination. Without the omnipresent control of the old system, collective energy began to pulse like a heartbeat.
A young woman stepped onto a makeshift stage and declared, "For too long, our lives were predetermined by invisible hands. Today, we reclaim our time!" Her words, simple and sincere, sparked conversations that rippled throughout the room.
Among the crowd, an older man with kind eyes gently placed a hand on a faded photograph and murmured, "I remember a time when we chose our paths. Perhaps we can do so again."
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Location: Hidden Broadcast Server – Vault 9 (Remote Office)
Time: 8:30 AM
In a discreet, secure facility far from the prying eyes of the old power, Nila and a small cadre of newly assembled tech rebels monitored the unfolding revolution. Data streams revealed a surge in free communications, and clandestine messages began weaving through the network.
Nila watched as messages appeared on her terminal:
"We are no longer bound."
"Our voices matter."
"Freedom is no longer a lie."
She turned to a colleague and said, "Kaen told us to trust the truth. Let’s ensure every citizen hears it." With a few decisive keystrokes, she pushed the broadcast further into the network, letting the revolutionary message permeate deeper and wider.
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Location: Rooftop Garden – Atop a Municipal Building
Time: 8:50 AM
Kaen stepped out onto a quiet rooftop overlooking the city’s sprawling skyline. The air was brisk, carrying the murmur of an urban awakening. He gazed over the city with a calm confidence that belied the countless loops of struggle that had brought him here. Though he had shaped this new era from the shadows, for a moment he allowed himself to simply watch and breathe.
His eyes softened as he looked out at the waking world. "This is only the beginning," he whispered into the wind. "Today, they choose. Tomorrow, the future is theirs."
In that tender, fleeting moment, the echoes of past loops seemed to fall silent—giving way to the voices of a new dawn.
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Location: Public Square, Downtown
Time: 9:05 AM
Across the square, the crowd began to disperse, their faces bright with cautious hope. Laughter, conversation, and even the clamor of street vendors filled the air. The old system’s grip had loosened, replaced by an open field of possibility. Each person was left with one undeniable choice: to reclaim their freedom or continue living by forgotten rules.
In that decisive moment, the world felt reborn—raw, unpredictable, and, above all, free. And as Kaen’s silent broadcast continued to echo through every digital channel, a new era of self-determination began to take shape beneath the rising sun.
Location: Decommissioned Security Hub – Sector 2
Time: 9:22 AM
The door creaked open as Kaen stepped inside. The old surveillance room—once the eyes and ears of the city—was dark now. Dust coated the consoles. Wires hung loose like dried veins from a dying system.
Ezra waited for him there, sitting atop a rusted panel. His face was tight with uncertainty.
"It’s happening," Ezra said, "People are waking up. But so are the old loyalists."
Kaen nodded. "It was never just about tearing down the structure. It’s about guiding what comes next—without becoming the tyrant we replaced."
Ezra threw him a small drive. "We intercepted chatter. Someone from the High Council escaped lockdown. They’re organizing ex-military enforcers. Low-profile. Underground."
Kaen pocketed it. "Of course they are. Tyrants never vanish. They hide in the cracks. Until someone seals them in."
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Location: Central Archives – Classified Storage Wing
Time: 10:00 AM
Nila walked through row after row of forgotten files. Most had been marked for deletion or redacted beyond usefulness. But a few—the ones Kaen had tagged over centuries—still pulsed with hidden data.
She accessed one folder marked "Loop Point Registry – CONFIDENTIAL."
Inside, thousands of timestamps. Observations. Hidden notes... from Kaen himself.
She gasped. "He’s been keeping track of every change he ever made..."
Moments where he gave bread to a child. Stopped a bus accident. Allowed himself to die instead of retaliating. Acts that didn’t benefit him—but tested how the world reacted.
Kaen hadn’t just shaped the system.
He’d shaped the people.
Nila whispered, "You weren’t just breaking the loop... You were training humanity to be better when it ended."
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Location: City Perimeter Fence – Abandoned Checkpoint
Time: 10:37 AM
Kaen arrived alone. Dust blew across the concrete. He approached a hidden hatch and opened it.
Inside stood an old man in a tattered uniform—one of the few surviving commandants of the old world. His eyes burned with cold resolve.
"You built this uprising on silence," the man said. "You’ll be buried in it."
Kaen didn’t blink. "You lost the moment you assumed obedience was eternal."
The man raised a gun. "We kept order."
Kaen stepped closer, fearless. "You manufactured it. I gave people the truth. They chose."
The old man hesitated.
"They always fear freedom," he growled.
"At first," Kaen replied. "But then they remember how to fly."
Location: Sector 3 Communications Hub – Rooftop Antenna
Time: 11:12 AM
The city was alive, but uncertain.
Some districts cheered. Others remained still, watching from their windows as neighbors debated what came next. The grip of the old world was gone—but its shadow lingered, like fog after a storm.
Kaen stood atop the communications hub where it had all begun—his first loop, his first failure, his first death.
He looked down at the crowd below. Not massive. Not unified. But present.
And that was enough.
Nila’s voice came through his earpiece.
"They’re asking what happens next. What system replaces the old one. Who leads it."
Kaen’s gaze never left the horizon.
"Tell them... they lead it. Together."
"But they’ll want someone to blame when it goes wrong."
He closed his eyes.
"Then they can blame me. I’ve lived a hundred thousand days. I can bear one more weight."
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Location: Public Broadcast Station – Underground Studio
Time: 11:40 AM
The screen flickered to life.
Kaen stood in front of a plain black backdrop. No titles. No logos. Just him.
He spoke calmly. Not like a conqueror. Not like a savior.
"I am no leader. I am no god. I’m simply a man who refused to forget.
For 100,000 tries, I watched a world that could be better... and chose not to be.
Today, you get to choose.
Not for me. Not for any flag.
For yourselves."
He paused.
"You will stumble. You will fall. But every step will be yours.
And that makes it real."
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Location: Various Districts
Time: Noon
The message spread like wildfire.
People didn’t cheer this time. They didn’t riot.
They talked.
Old rivals sat on park benches. Factory workers stood shoulder to shoulder with former guards. Families who’d lived in fear now made signs—not of protest, but of hope.
Kaen’s revolution was not in fire or steel.
It was in conversation. In ownership.
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Location: Sector 8 Alley – Alone
Time: 12:25 PM
Kaen sat on a cold metal step, staring at the sky.
No earpiece. No data feed. Just the sound of wind and distant voices rising.
Ezra found him there.
"You should be out front," Ezra said.
"I’ve always been behind," Kaen replied with a tired smile. "Let them stand where I never could."
Ezra sat beside him. "So... what now?"
Kaen took a long breath, eyes half-closed.
"Now, I rest."
And for the first time since the first loop began...
He truly meant it.
To be continue...