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The Undying Immortal System

Book 2 Fully Edited and Updated

Author: G Tolley
updatedAt: 2025-08-02

(July 4,2025)

Hello everyone,

Just want to let you know that I just updated all the chapters of Volume 2 to their final version. They should

be free of errors... hopefully. The affected chapters are 57 through 113.

In general, there is nothing "new" in these chapters. If you don't reread them, then you aren't going to be missing anything story wise, so don't worry. The changes were mostly to improve readability and fix any inconsistences that had crept in. That said, there were some rather major changes that I feel I need to point out.

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1. Fang's motivations have had an overhaul. There was a lot of negative feedback about his drifting through the beginning of the life 61. This has been reworked in a way that I am more satisfied with.

2. Many things have been stated more openly. This is to make it more clear that Fang didn't just stumble onto the spatial fire seed. He was subtlety guided to it step by step throughout the entire book.

3. A bit of rework on the characterization of Mei and why Fang becomes so distrustful of her blessing in life 61. Nothing big, but I think it fixes a few issues.

Thanks for reading,

G. Tolley

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